sábado, 12 de julio de 2014

Entry n°5 What is Academic Writing?



What is Academic Writing?

INTRODUCTION: THE ACADEMIC WRITING TASK

This chapter is produced to show you the importance of writing as a communication skill and specifically what academic writing is like. Understanding what you are doing as you write and how you approach the writing task is the secret of your success with academic writing.

Myths about writing

There are some misconceptions which people often arrive at college possessing.
Myth #1: The “Paint by Numbers” myth
Writes believe that they must follow certain stages in order to write correctly
Myth #2: writers only start writing when they have everything prepared.
They figure out much of what they want to write as they write it.
Myth #3: Perfect first drafts
Polished writings take a lot of revision, so nobody writes perfect first drafts.
Myth #4: some got it; I don’t – the genius fallacy
Writers can improve with effort and study.
Myth #5: Good grammar is good writing
Writing is more than grammatical correctness. A good writing has to do with achieving your desired effect upon your audience.
Myth #6: The Five Paragraph Essay
You should determine whenever this format will be useful for your particular writing assignments.
Myth #7: never use “I”
Avoiding the use of I may implies a distrust of informality.


The academic writing situation
It is very important to develop your writer’s sense about the communicating within the writing situation and that includes knowing the difference between speaking and writing. As we are separated from our audience when we write, we must use punctuation and word choice to communicate our tone.



Looking More Closely at the “Academic Writing” Situation

There are some questions you must keep in mind in order to have a closer look writing situation in college:

Who is your audience?  (Professor, classmates or a secondary outside audience)

What is the occasion or context? (The teacher gives you and assignment for you to learn and demonstrate your learning)
What is your message? (It will be your learning or the interpretation obtained from your study of the subject matter)
What is your purpose? (Getting a good grade or showing your learning)
What documents/genres are used? (The most frequent type of document used is the essay)
To accomplish with a particular task you must be aware of what the professor expects you to do, and that is to demonstrate knowledge and proficiency accompanied with thinking skills, interpretation and presentation. To achieve that you should take into account the next elements:
Knowledge of Research Skills
Researching is an important component of writing assignments, so you will need to learn where to find reliable information.
The Ability to Read Complex Texts
You will be asked to write about topics you are not familiar with. So your ability to write well will depend on how much you read. And you will also need to think critically, separating facts from opinions.
The Understanding of key Disciplinary Concepts
It is important to know that each discipline has its own key concepts and language and what your professors want to see is that you apply these concepts in your writings.
Strategies for Synthesizing, Analyzing, and Responding Critically to New Information
You will need to learn ways of sorting and finding meaningful patterns in this information.
Academic Writing Is an Argument (A carefully arranged and supported presentation of a viewpoint) and an Analysis (identify meaningful parts of the subject to study it closely)
Three Common Types of College Writing Assignments
The Closed writing Assignment: it presents you two counter claims and asks you to determine from your own analysis the more valid claim.
The semi-Open writing Assignment: It presents you a subject matter for you to write upon, but you also have to determine your own claim.
The Open Writing Assignment: It requires you to decide both your writing topic and your claim or thesis.

Three Characteristics of Academic Writing:
  1. Clear evidence in writing that the writer have been persistent, open-minded and disciplined in study
  2. The dominance of reason over emotions or sensual perception
  3. An imagined reader who is coolly rational, reading for information, and intending to formulate a reasoned response.
THE FORMAT OF ACADEMIC WRITING
You will be expected to deliver a paper with specific textual features.  The following list contains the characteristics of a “Critical Essay” (critical in the sense of critical thinking, not in the sense of criticize)
  1. It as an argument, the essay makes a point and supports it.
  2. The point is debatable and open to interpretation, not a statement of the obvious.
  3. The critical essay should be organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
  4. Support: Using quotations is required. You need enough support to be convincing.
  5. Document the sources to clarify where that information came from.
  6. Clear transition sentences to help the reader to recognize the movement from one main point to the next.
  7. A critical essay is put into an academic essay format such as the MLA or APA document format.
  8. Grammatical correctness: you need to edit your final draft carefully in order to avoid grammatical problems.

WORKS CITED
Carroll, Lee Ann. Rehearsing New Roles: How College Student Develop s Writers.                   Carbondale: Southern Illinois UP, 2002. Print.
Thaiss, Chris and Terry Zawacki. Engaged Writers & Dynamic Disciplines: Research       on the      Academic Writing Life. Portsmouth: Boynton/Cook, 2006. Print
 

sábado, 7 de junio de 2014

Entry n°4

Improved version



Working Women
Due to many historical processes the modern phenomenon of working women is not the same of several years ago. Nowadays women can work everywhere, whereas in the past they were expected to devote themselves to the house and the family. Today women are able to obtain a master’s degree in any college but in past times they were not allowed to do academic studies. Female suffrage was established at the end of the twentieth century. However, it was very difficult for women to participate in democracy before that time. The current role of women in work is the consequence of a continuous development of events throughout history.

Causes of Secondary Students’ Failure
Students’ failure is something that happens very often in the classroom and has some external and internal reasons. Some of these reasons come from outside the classroom like having a job. Various students are taking their first steps in the work environment when they are not at school. Therefore, they have limited time to focus on their homework and to study. Others see themselves affected by problems in the family such as parents divorce, violence or problems with the law for instance. A number of other reasons of students’ failure have their roots inside the classroom, such as bullying and shyness. Being bullied in all its forms (verbal, physical, psychological) has huge impact on students’ performance. The victims are likely to have low self-esteem, anxiety and depression. Consequently, they try to avoid going to school. Shyness is seemed as an important factor of student’s failure because it interferes with their learning. If they have doubts about a certain topic, they will not ask. Hence, they remain in a place of uncertainty. These experiences cause a huge amount of stress on the students and as a result, they become unable to concentrate on schoolwork and they fail.
 


The previous paragraphs were written collaboratively with two of my classmates. The parts that are underlined are not well written according to the type of paragraph we tried to write and some of them have mistakes. The main problem was the choosing of the topic sentence. It was not clear enough and it was divided in two sentences .As a result of that the supporting sentences were not appropiated.
I think that we should have taken into account the theory we had seen in the book From paragraph to essay. There are some clear examples of topic sentences and it explains how to write a paragraph developed by listing or comparison. The text also says that the concluding sentence should be just one sentence but we wrote two in the second paragraph. The parts that needed to be changed in order to improve both paragraphs will be corrected.



Working woman
The modern phenomenon of working women is the result of many historical processes that permitted them to have a job. Some issues were stereotyped role, professional studies and female suffrage. Firstly, modern women can work everywhere, whereas in the past they were expected to devote themselves to the house and the family. Secondly, today women can obtain a master’s degree in any college but in other times they were not allowed to do academic studies. We can appreciate a clear example of this in 1885 when  Elida Passo finally graduated in pharmacy.  Moreover, even though today women can participate in democracy, this right was not established until some years ago. To have an idea of how difficult the possibility of participating in rights was, it is worth mentioning that female suffrage started at the end of the twentieth century. The current role of women in work is the consequence of a continuous development of events throughout history, events that will lead to future analysis.   





Causes of Secondary Students’ Failure
Students’ failure is something that happens very often in the classroom and has a wide range of reasons. Some of these reasons come from outside the classroom like having a job and family problems among others. Various students are taking their first steps in the work environment when they are not at school. Therefore, they have limited time to focus on their homework or to study. Others see themselves affected by problems in the family; parents divorce, violence, problems with the law for instance. A number of other reasons of students’ failure have their roots inside the classroom, such as bullying and shyness. Being bullied in all its forms (verbal, physical, psychological) has huge impact on students’ performance. The victims are likely to have low self-esteem, anxiety and depression. Consequently, they will try to avoid going to school. Even though shyness may not seem an important factor of student’s failure, it interferes with their learning. If they have doubts about a certain topic, they will not ask. Hence, they remain in a place of uncertainty. Being successful at school is not simple, there is a large number of factors that lead students into failing. These experiences cause a huge amount of stress on the students and as a result, they become unable to concentrate on schoolwork.

viernes, 9 de mayo de 2014

A Well Written Paragraph



► American paragraph structure is different than the ones in other cultures:

             ▼The topic sentence:
    • One central idea
    • An opinion as an opener
    • One thesis statement
    • Has to be general
    • Should be indented at the beginning

               ▼The body contains the details (sentences and all other ideas should be directly related to the main idea).
  •                     Could be any length
  •                     Details:                                              
o      Why is this important?
o      What are the reasons?
o      Are there any examples of this?
  • There are two ways of ordering details: taking into account their level of importance, and/or chronologically (order of events)
  • The body should contain:
☼Flow- bridges (Sentences with clear connections to preceding and subsequent sentences, and paragraphs whose topic sentence is connected to the closing sentence of the preceding one, and so on)
☼Key terms
☼Variety of words
☼Links between words
                                                                        ☼Synonyms in order to avoid repetition
              ▼Closing sentence
    • Reminder of topic
    • Must keep the reader thinking
    • Must prepare the reader for the next paragraph

      ► Other things to take into account in order to write well-written paragraphs and academic papers:
    • Always ask yourself about what is expected of you
    • Use and make yourself fond of your module handbooks
    • What are the learning outcomes within this activity?
    • Use key direction words
    • Make a plan
    • Reread and edit
    • Proof read
    • Avoid going off on tangents
    • Always have the title in front of you
    • Provide a wide range of arguments


Students: Alvarenga Rodrigo and Mazzei Santiago


Cited Works
engVid.com (2009, May 19). Parts of a Paragraph - English Academic Writing Introduction
[Video file]. Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCuExRE6N-4
engVid.com (2013, July 22). Writing Skills: The Paragraph [Video file]. Retrieved from
Edge Hill University (2013, Julne 20). Introduction to Academic Writing [Video file].
            Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CelpkwseU5U